Nowadays, jeans are considered to be the most popular type of clothes in the USA. Many people wear jeans every day. What part does this type of garment play in American culture? Discuss this point of view and give your personal opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
These days,
jeans
are most
versatile and very popular Correct article usage
the most
clothes
in every country, including USA
because of Correct article usage
the USA
its
materials Correct pronoun usage
their
as well as
faddishness
for Correct pronoun usage
their faddishness
good looking
purposes. Add a hyphen
good-looking
Jeans
are the most widely used product ever but
especially, in America. Correct word choice
apply
American
created Replace the word
Americans
jeans
for fashion and for their movies to encourage people to buy jeans
. They advertised all around the world
and made it a common mandatory clothe
for their citizen.
Replace the word
clothing
Jeans
are now the most widely used as clothes
in every continent. For example
, a garment company created clothes
and
that Correct word choice
apply
was
made with Correct subject-verb agreement
were
jeans
, they wanted to market this type
of Fix the agreement mistake
these types
clothes
to the shopping center
, Change the spelling
centre
the
garment company found a strategy to advertise Correct word choice
so the
this
product to the world
. Eventually, the company's marketing department produced a movie called "Fashion for Every One
" where the main character used Replace the word
Everyone
jeans
as clothes
, which was the most successful movie in 1965. Thereafter
, they got lots of attention from everywhere in this
Correct determiner usage
the
world
and jeans
became popular at that point.
Although
, it was been so popular in
that Change preposition
at
time
as well as
slowly about to disappear from its market but
there Remove the conjunction
apply
was
already lots Correct subject-verb agreement
were
jeans
manufacturers Change preposition
of jeans
those
who were attentive at that Correct determiner usage
apply
time
to deal with problems and lose
of interest of general people. Replace the word
loss
For instance
, a country name's
Bangladesh, now Change noun form
name
they
produces many types of Correct pronoun usage
apply
jeans
and supply to the big markets. When the
Correct article usage
apply
American
Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
lost
their pride Wrong verb form
lose
of
Change preposition
in
jeans
on
the other hand, Add the comma(s)
, on
Add an article
a country
country
like Bangladesh and Change the noun form
countries
other
more they put their mind Fix the agreement mistake
others
for
how to make Change preposition
on
jeans
efficiently. Because of
Change preposition
apply
its
already been advertised all over the seas Correct your spelling
it's
therefore
, there wasn't that much competition at that Add the comma(s)
, therefore
time
. Moreover
, because of
Bangladeshi people Change preposition
apply
caught
on Add a missing verb
were caught
time
and learned about jeans
and marketed widely around the world
that is
the main reason that jeans
still exist.
In conclusion, nowadays, jeans
became
Wrong verb form
have become
neccessary
to Correct your spelling
necessary
wore
as a cloth, from kids to Wrong verb form
wear
grandfather
everyone using Fix the agreement mistake
grandfathers
jeans
as their favourite clothes
. In my opinion, jeans
are not only a culter
or tradition anymore but Correct your spelling
culture
also
emotional
attachment to us. I think for that reason Add an article
an emotional
jeans
still exist in our heart
.Fix the agreement mistake
hearts
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coherence cohesion
You provided a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in maintaining focus on the topic. Ensure that the main points consistently support the thesis throughout your essay.
task achievement
Your response is relevant to the task. However, focus more on providing specific examples of the cultural significance of jeans in American culture, and ensure that your ideas are fully developed.
coherence cohesion
The essay structure is logical, but the argument is somewhat repetitive. Consider distinct points related to American culture, such as jeans' role in casual fashion or workwear.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly presents the theme of jeans in American culture, setting up a discussion relevant to the task.
coherence cohesion
Conclusion effectively summarizes the main argument and adds a personal perspective, reinforcing the overall viewpoint.
task achievement
The essay provides a historical perspective on jeans and mentions their international influence, which adds depth to the discussion.
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