Nowadays, jeans are considered to be the most popular type of clothes in the USA. Many people wear jeans every day. What part does this type of garment play in American culture? Discuss this point of view and give your personal opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
These days,
jeans
are Use synonyms
most
versatile and very popular Correct article usage
the most
clothes
in every country, including Use synonyms
USA
because of Correct article usage
the USA
its
materials Correct pronoun usage
their
as well as
Linking Words
faddishness
for Correct pronoun usage
their faddishness
good looking
purposes. Add a hyphen
good-looking
Jeans
are the most widely used product ever Use synonyms
but
especially, in America. Correct word choice
apply
American
created Replace the word
Americans
jeans
for fashion and for their movies to encourage people to buy Use synonyms
jeans
. They advertised all around the Use synonyms
world
and made it a common mandatory Use synonyms
clothe
for their citizen.
Replace the word
clothing
Jeans
are now the most widely used as Use synonyms
clothes
in every continent. Use synonyms
For example
, a garment company created Linking Words
clothes
Use synonyms
and
that Correct word choice
apply
was
made with Correct subject-verb agreement
were
jeans
, they wanted to market Use synonyms
Linking Words
this type
of Fix the agreement mistake
these types
clothes
to the shopping Use synonyms
center
, Change the spelling
centre
the
garment company found a strategy to advertise Correct word choice
so the
this
product to the Linking Words
world
. Eventually, the company's marketing department produced a movie called "Fashion for Use synonyms
Every One
" where the main character used Replace the word
Everyone
jeans
as Use synonyms
clothes
, which was the most successful movie in 1965. Use synonyms
Thereafter
, they got lots of attention from everywhere in Linking Words
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
the
world
and Use synonyms
jeans
became popular at that point.
Use synonyms
Although
, it was been so popular Linking Words
in
that Change preposition
at
time
Use synonyms
as well as
slowly about to disappear from its market Linking Words
but
there Remove the conjunction
apply
was
already lots Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Use synonyms
jeans
manufacturers Change preposition
of jeans
those
who were attentive at that Correct determiner usage
apply
time
to deal with problems and Use synonyms
lose
of interest of general people. Replace the word
loss
For instance
, a country Linking Words
name's
Bangladesh, now Change noun form
name
they
produces many types of Correct pronoun usage
apply
jeans
and supply to the big markets. When Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
American
Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
lost
their pride Wrong verb form
lose
of
Change preposition
in
jeans
Use synonyms
Linking Words
on
the other hand, Add the comma(s)
, on
Add an article
a country
country
like Bangladesh and Change the noun form
countries
other
more they put their mind Fix the agreement mistake
others
for
how to make Change preposition
on
jeans
efficiently. Because Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
its
already been advertised all over the seas Correct your spelling
it's
Linking Words
therefore
, there wasn't that much competition at that Add the comma(s)
, therefore
time
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, because Linking Words
of
Bangladeshi people Change preposition
apply
caught
on Add a missing verb
were caught
time
and learned about Use synonyms
jeans
and marketed widely around the Use synonyms
world
Use synonyms
that is
the main reason that Linking Words
jeans
still exist.
In conclusion, nowadays, Use synonyms
jeans
Use synonyms
became
Wrong verb form
have become
neccessary
to Correct your spelling
necessary
wore
as a cloth, from kids to Wrong verb form
wear
grandfather
everyone using Fix the agreement mistake
grandfathers
jeans
as their favourite Use synonyms
clothes
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
jeans
are not only a Use synonyms
culter
or tradition anymore but Correct your spelling
culture
also
Linking Words
emotional
attachment to us. I think for that reason Add an article
an emotional
jeans
still exist in our Use synonyms
heart
.Fix the agreement mistake
hearts
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Your response is relevant to the task. However, focus more on providing specific examples of the cultural significance of jeans in American culture, and ensure that your ideas are fully developed.
coherence cohesion
The essay structure is logical, but the argument is somewhat repetitive. Consider distinct points related to American culture, such as jeans' role in casual fashion or workwear.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly presents the theme of jeans in American culture, setting up a discussion relevant to the task.
coherence cohesion
Conclusion effectively summarizes the main argument and adds a personal perspective, reinforcing the overall viewpoint.
task achievement
The essay provides a historical perspective on jeans and mentions their international influence, which adds depth to the discussion.
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