The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the activities of
anthoropology
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anthropology
graduates
from a distinct university did
when they finished their undergraduate degree course. The table illustrates Unnecessary verb
apply
salaries
of anthropology Correct article usage
the salaries
graduates
after five years'
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years
work
.
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of work
Overall
, a whole host of graduates
' detination
goes for Correct your spelling
destination
full time
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full-time
work
and part-time work
and postgrad study is the least selection for graduates
. Furthermore
, government sector and freelance consultants achieve
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earn
higher
money, compared to private companies.
Regarding Correct word choice
more
to
the pie chart, individuals mainly desire to have full-time Remove the preposition
apply
work
which is 52 per cent
, which is about a half of them. The other half of graduates
go for part-time work
, unemployed, full-time postgrad study, part-time work
and postgrad study, and unknown which are 15, 12, 8, 8, 5 per cent
respectively.
According to
the table, government
sector and freelance consultants has more salaries, compared to private companies, and they gain relatively similar to each other which are 5 Correct article usage
the government
percent
for 25,000 to 49,999, and Change the spelling
per cent
and
roughly 50 per Remove the redundancy
apply
cent
in
100,000 and over. Private companies achieve less than other sectors which starts from 10 per Change preposition
for
cent
to 30 per cent
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