The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map compares the

change

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changes

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made to the university

sports

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facilities

between1990

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between 1990

and the

recent

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present

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. In 1990, the

sports

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area

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included a large

park

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in the northwest, a car

park

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in the northeast and an outdoor pool in the southwest.

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, a Cafe and a changing room were located in the southeast corner of the

area

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. Several significant changes have now taken place. The

park

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area

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has been replaced by a basketball court

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the outdoor pool has been converted into an indoor pool. A reception

area

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has been added in the central part of the map, with the cafe and changing room and Cafe relocated around the reception.

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, a fitness centre has been constructed next to the new changing room. The former car

park

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in the northwest has been removed,

while

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tennis

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the tennis

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court has been

builded

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built

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, creating more space for

sports

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activities. In general, the

sports

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grounds have undergone substantial transformations, with an increased number of

sport

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sports

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facilities and

removal

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the removal

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of open green spaces.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, area, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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