The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map compares the

change

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changes

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made to the university

sports

facilities

between1990

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between 1990

and the

recent

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present

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. In 1990, the

sports

area

included a large

park

in the northwest, a car

park

in the northeast and an outdoor pool in the southwest.

Additionally

, a Cafe and a changing room were located in the southeast corner of the

area

. Several significant changes have now taken place. The

park

area

has been replaced by a basketball court

while

the outdoor pool has been converted into an indoor pool. A reception

area

has been added in the central part of the map, with the cafe and changing room and Cafe relocated around the reception.

Moreover

, a fitness centre has been constructed next to the new changing room. The former car

park

in the northwest has been removed,

while

tennis

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the tennis

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court has been

builded

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built

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, creating more space for

sports

activities. In general, the

sports

grounds have undergone substantial transformations, with an increased number of

sport

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sports

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facilities and

removal

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the removal

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of open green spaces.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, area, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
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7Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

166 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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