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The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The map compares the changes made to the university
sports
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 facilities between 1990 and the present. In 1990, the
sports
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area
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 featured a large
park
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 in the northwest, a car
park
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 in the northeast, and an outdoor pool in the southwest.
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, a café and a changing room were located in the southeast corner of the
area
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. Several significant changes have now taken place. The
park
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area
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 has been replaced by a basketball court,
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 the outdoor pool has been converted into an indoor pool. A reception
area
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 has been added in the central part of the map, with the café and changing room relocated adjacent to it.
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, a fitness
center
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 has been constructed next to the new changing room. The former car
park
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 in the northeast has been removed and replaced by tennis courts, creating more space for
sports
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 activities. In general, the
sports
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 grounds have undergone substantial transformations, with an increased number of
sports
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 facilities and the removal of open green spaces.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, area, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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