The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates portions of various locations being used for holding classes and the bar chart demonstrates the popularity of different kinds of
dance
styles among two age categories of children in an Australian town.
Overall
, it is evident that most classes are held in private
salon
Fix the agreement mistake
salons
show examples
;
in contrast
, college-based studios have the least usage in
this
particular activity. Meanwhile, ballet is the most appealing to kids under 11
while
modern
dance
is the most favoured for those aged between 11 and 16.
According to
the pie chart, private workrooms have the main portion with 48% and school halls (after-school) with half of that providing
dance
courses.
On the other hand
, college-based studios share the least amount with one from ten places and
also
community halls & others that have almost twice the
last
figure for holding
dance
classes.
Additionally
, it is presented in the bars that youngsters under 11 mostly preferred the ballet genre with just more than 600 individuals in attendance, in comparison to modern styles which are the most favourite among young people aged 11 to 16.
However
, Tap
dance
is common for both age groups with a similar number between 400 and 500 students attending.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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