The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given layout shows the design of a
museum
in 1998 and its development in 2008.
this
essay will report the main features and the updated
museum
.
Overall
, the most significant changes were building a new restaurant and adding fountains in the garden.
While
expanding the
cafe
area,
in addition
to relocating the exhibition rooms, the
lady's
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bathroom, and the shop.
According to
the updated layout, the garden stays at the centre of the
museum
during both periods.
However
, in the 2008 update, there are fountains and a
cafe
sitting area to enjoy the weather. In front of the lawn, there is the coffee shop, which was reduced in space to accommodate the women's restroom next to it. Another big modification was constructing a dining establishment on the left side of the
cafe
while
simultaneously replacing the permanent exhibition rooms to the right side adjacent to the garden, women's toilet, and entrance.
Similarly
, the temporary rooms, shop, bags, and coats were substituted on the left-hand side of the entryway.
To sum up
, the
museum
had significant alterations from 1998 to 2008. The important ones are opening a restaurant, maximizing the
cafe
setting, and relocating the display spaces.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, cafe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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