The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams compare an
island
before and after the construction of several tourist facilities.
Overall
,
while
the original palm trees and the beach have remained largely untouched, the
island
has undergone significant changes with the addition of accommodations, entertainment, and transportation infrastructure, making it a more accessible and enjoyable destination for tourists. Before the development, the
island
was approximately 250 meters long from west to east and 60 meters wide from north to south. It featured two clusters of palm trees, one located in the west and the other in the east. A narrow beach stretched along the western tip of the
island
, which was surrounded by the sea on three sides. The
island
had no visible infrastructure at
this
stage. After the redevelopment, the
island
transformed into a tourist-friendly location. A large pier was constructed on the southern side, serving as both the entrance to the
island
and a docking area for yachts and boats.
This
pier connects via a vehicle track to a reception building located at the
center
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of the
island
. Adjacent to the reception in the north is a restaurant, accessible by the same track. To the east and west of the reception are clusters of houses for visitor accommodation, all interconnected by footpaths. A footpath from the western cluster leads directly to the beach, where tourists can enjoy activities
such
as swimming.
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