You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the number of stolen vehicles during a nine-year period in the United Kingdom, Sweden, France, and Canada.
Generally, Britain has the highest amount of theft level in comparison to other countries,
while
the amount of car pilfering in Canada and France was the same amount.
Commencing with Sweden, in 1990, it was about 18 per thousand
; then
it fell down slightly. Then
, in 1992, it started to increase gradually until it reached approximately 15 thefts per thousand
.
In contrast
, the United Kingdom began the period with about 12 thefts per thousand
. Then
, it rose to 20 in 1993, and the level decreased in 1994 to 15. But it hit 20 again by 1997.
Regarding France and Canada, they showed fluctuation, and both were at the same level. Both finished the period with approximately 11 thefts per thousand
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