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The given table illustrates the number of full-time students who are Indian nationals and studied at six universities in the UK in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.

The given table illustrates the number of full-time students who are Indian nationals and studied at six universities in the UK in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.
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The given table illustrates the
number
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 of full-time
students
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 who are Indian nationals and studied at six universities in the UK in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 and the
percentage
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 of
students
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 increased in the second
session
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 in all universities. Coventry
University
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 had the highest
number
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 of
students
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,
while
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 Sheffield
University
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 had the highest
percentage
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 of
students
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. In
session
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 2020/2021, the
number
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 of Indian
students
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 in Coventry
University
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 was 2,300, and in the 2021/2022
session
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, the
number
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 increased to 5290, which was the highest among all universities in two sessions. In Sheffield
University
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 was 815 in
session
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 2020/21, and it increased to 2,345 in
session
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 2021/22. The
percentage
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 increased by up to 187% which was the highest among all the percentages in two sessions. The
University
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 of Greenwich had 2455
students
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 in
session
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 2020/2021 and 4500
students
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 in
session
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 2021/22 from India and the
percentage
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 increased by up to 84%.
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, in
Angila
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Anglia
 Ruskin
University
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, in
session
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 2020/2021, there were 1,925 Indian
students
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, and it increased to 3265 in the next
session
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 2021/22, and the
percentage
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 increased by up to 69.6.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, percentage, session, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
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