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The given table illustrates the number of full-time students who are Indian nationals and studied at six universities in the UK in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.

The given table illustrates the number of full-time students who are Indian nationals and studied at six universities in the UK in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.
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The given table illustrates the
number
 of full-time
students
 who are Indian nationals and studied at six universities in the UK in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.
Overall
, the
number
 of
students
 and the
percentage
 of
students
 increased in the second
session
 in all universities. Coventry
University
 had the highest
number
 of
students
,
while
 Sheffield
University
 had the highest
percentage
 of
students
. In
session
 2020/2021, the
number
 of Indian
students
 in Coventry
University
 was 2,300, and in the 2021/2022
session
, the
number
 increased to 5290, which was the highest among all universities in two sessions. In Sheffield
University
, the
number
 of
students
 was 815 in
session
 2020/21, and it increased to 2,345 in
session
 2021/22. The
percentage
 increased by up to 187% which was the highest among all the percentages in two sessions. The
University
 of Greenwich had 2455
students
 in
session
 2020/2021 and 4500
students
 in
session
 2021/22 from India and the
percentage
 increased by up to 84%.
Similarly
, in
Angila
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Anglia
 Ruskin
University
, in
session
 2020/2021, there were 1,925 Indian
students
, and it increased to 3265 in the next
session
 2021/22, and the
percentage
 increased by up to 69.6.
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