The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon.
The diagram illustrates the development of a
salmon
from Use synonyms
egg
during its life cycle.
Correct article usage
an egg
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there are three distinct stages illustrated in the process, commencing with producing eggs in the upper Linking Words
river
and ending with the development of an adult Use synonyms
salmon
.
The first Use synonyms
stage
is when the Use synonyms
salmon
eggs have been laid among small stones and reeds in the Use synonyms
slow moving
upper Add a hyphen
slow-moving
river
. These natural boundaries are needed to protect them from predators and rising temperatures. Use synonyms
This
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stage
continues approximately from five to six months. The next step Use synonyms
after
Linking Words
this
is fry, which is from three to eight cm, immigrates to the Linking Words
fast flowing
lower Add a hyphen
fast-flowing
river
where it changes its Use synonyms
color
from blue to turquoise, Change the spelling
colour
grows
Correct word choice
and grows
the
lengths from twelve to fifteen cm. Correct article usage
apply
On
Change preposition
At
this
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stage
, it’s called smolt and it resides Use synonyms
around
four years. Gradually, the smolt travels to the open sea where its body becomes bigger from seventy to Change preposition
for around
seventy six
cm and Add a hyphen
seventy-six
Add an article
the color
color
is transformed to Change the spelling
colour
the
grey, it is done to survive Correct article usage
apply
while
it travels. Adult Linking Words
salmon
Use synonyms
lives
here for around five years after which it returns to the upper Correct subject-verb agreement
live
river
to produce eggs on the final Use synonyms
stage
. Having completed all these steps, the lifecycle will Use synonyms
then
begin again.Linking Words
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