The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates in
production
changes of Use synonyms
suits
, Use synonyms
dresses
, and coats in a garment factory over a 20-year period Use synonyms
since
1990 to 2010. The figure is represented in millions.
It's obviously to be seen that the Change preposition
from
production
of coats increased dramatically from 1990 to 2010. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the garment factory produced Linking Words
suits
rose sharply from 1990 to 1995. After that, the manufacture of Use synonyms
suits
declined significantly from 1995 to 2005, and Use synonyms
then
slightly increased from 2005 to 2010. Linking Words
Thirdly
, there was little growth in the Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
dresses
from 1990 to 2010.
Looking more closely at the line graph represents the manufacturing of coats was highest than Use synonyms
suits
and Use synonyms
dresses
from 7.5 Use synonyms
million
increased to 25 Use synonyms
million
over a 20-year period. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
suits
more fluctuated than Use synonyms
dresses
from 1990 to 2005. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the figure demonstrates the manufacturing of Linking Words
suits
similar to Use synonyms
dresses
gentlely surged were 19 Use synonyms
million
and 15 Use synonyms
million
respectively from 2005 to 2010.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, suits, dresses, million with synonyms.
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