The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph illustrates the count of closed
shops
and new shops
that opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, there were more closures than openings
in 2011 and the difference was about 2000. Also
, there were as many closures as openings
in 2014. Then
, after the small fluctuations around 6500, the closures experienced a sharp decrease of roughly 6000.
Looking at the details, before a considerable increase between 2012 and 2014, the openings
experienced a dramatic decline to approximately 4000. Moreover
, after the numbers of openings
and closings were almost equalled in 2014, the count of opened shops
witnessed a noticeable decrease. Then
, the latter remained at the same level for 2 years, about 4000.
Furthermore
, the least number of closings during this
period was in 2015, however
, then
, this
count jumped suddenly to 5000. Afterwards, there were only small fluctuations, in the past 2 years. As for the number of newly built shops
, it experienced a noticeable decline of 1000 in 2018.Submitted by nurali_serik on
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