some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many young

children

have

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indiscriminate

indiscriminately

access to a

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mobile

phone.

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is because their parents allow those devices to take part of their daily lives, frequently abusing

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their

use

. In my opinion,

this

provokes a terrible impact

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childrens´s

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children´s

living conditions, affecting not only their

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physical

but their mental

health

as well. To start with, the abusive

use

of cell phones and other

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electronic

elements in very young people can cause serious injuries

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their vision.

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days, we see

children

using glasses from a younger age

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we used to observe in the past. What is more, the fact of being

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connected

so

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many hours to screens has a negative impact

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their weight, causing obesity,

due to

the fact that many of them

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several hours

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sitting

,

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instead

of playing outside and

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sports. Another undesired physical side effect caused in

children

today because of their sedentarismus

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is back problems.

Secondly

, the abuse of the

use

of technology from a very early age can negatively affect

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children´s

mental

health

. If we observe available statistics, it is sad to learn about the

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increase in mental

health

issues related to

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exposure to those constant

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stimulants

. The difficulty in having a face to face contact with their pairs and the impossibility of paying

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attention

in class,

due to

anxiety problems, are other consequences of

this

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. And

lastly

, the

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accessibility

of

children

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many social media networks through smartphones without parenting control can be very dangerous, because

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have access to a variety of

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that

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not

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appropriate

for their age, and they can get involved in chats with adults with criminal intentions. Summarising, I do strongly believe that the

use

of

electronical

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electronic

devices in

children

in current days,

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mobile phones, has derived

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detriment of their

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, not only in terms of physical

health

but mental

health

as well.

Consequently

, the adults should be more aware of the damage

this

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tendency

could

may

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cause

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their daughters and sons, and take the proper measures to tackle

this

issue.