The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the nationality of the tourists entering Mexico between 2005 and 2010 by international flights.
Overall
, the main point that is
noticeable is that number
of the United States entries
is the highest during the whole period.
To look more in detail, the amount of Canada
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Canadian
entries
increased steadily between 2005 and 2010, but there is an exception in 2009. The USA reached a peak in 2007 by
just under 7 million Change preposition
with
entries
. Both the amount of the USA and south
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South
America
entries
fluctuated between 2005 and 2010. Furthermore
, the number
of Europe entries
in 2010 is nearly double the number
of south
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South
America
while
it is almost time three as much as South America
in 2007. While
the number
of Europe entries
rose gradually between 2005 and 2008, South America
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American
entries
went up and down. The highest amount of
Europe was in 2008 with approximately 2 million.Change preposition
in
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