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The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on international flights, 2005-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the nationality of the tourists entering Mexico between 2005 and 2010 by international flights.
Overall
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, the main point
that is
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 noticeable is that
number
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 of the United States
entries
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 is the highest during the whole period. To look more in detail, the amount of
Canada
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entries
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 increased steadily between 2005 and 2010, but there is an exception in 2009. The USA reached a peak in 2007
by
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 just under 7 million
entries
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. Both the amount of the USA and
south
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South
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America
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entries
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 fluctuated between 2005 and 2010.
Furthermore
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, the
number
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 of Europe
entries
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 in 2010 is nearly double the
number
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 of
south
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South
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America
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while
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 it is almost time three as much as South
America
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 in 2007.
While
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 the
number
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 of Europe
entries
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 rose gradually between 2005 and 2008, South
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America
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American
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entries
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 went up and down. The highest amount
of
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in
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 Europe was in 2008 with approximately 2 million.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, entries, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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