The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chars
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charts
provides
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provide
the
information about the Correct article usage
apply
amount
of American households in five groups of annual Change the quantifier
number
income
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the number
of households that had less than 25,000 million
annual income
was not fewer than 25 million
in these three years. In contrast
, only in 2015, there were 30 million
of
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household
exceeding $100,000.
In 2007, there were three groups of Fix the agreement mistake
households
household
reaching 25 Fix the agreement mistake
households
million
units, those are group
of less than $25,000, &25,000-$49,999, and $100,000 or more. Fix the agreement mistake
groups
However
, in 2011, the number
of household
which were over $100,000 annual Change to a plural noun
households
income
decreased, whilst that of the group of less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 surpassed it, almost reached
30 Wrong verb form
reaching
million
units.
In 2015, the number
of the highest annual income
family
($100,000 or more) Fix the agreement mistake
families
was
exceeded 30 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
, which made this
group the largest number
of households. In the same year, the
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apply
household
with annual Fix the agreement mistake
households
income
between $75,000 to $99,999 reached 15 million
at
the first time.Change preposition
for
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, number, million, household with synonyms.
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