The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
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provides
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the
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information about the
amount
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number
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of American households in five groups of annual
income
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the
number
of households that had less than 25,000
million
annual
income
was not fewer than 25
million
in these three years.
In contrast
, only in 2015, there were 30
million
of
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household
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households
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exceeding $100,000. In 2007, there were three groups of
household
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households
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reaching 25
million
units, those are
group
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groups
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of less than $25,000, &25,000-$49,999, and $100,000 or more.
However
, in 2011, the
number
of
household
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which were over $100,000 annual
income
decreased, whilst that of the group of less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 surpassed it, almost
reached
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30
million
units. In 2015, the
number
of the highest annual
income
family
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families
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($100,000 or more)
was
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exceeded 30
million
, which made
this
group the largest
number
of households. In the same year,
the
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household
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households
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with annual
income
between $75,000 to $99,999 reached 15
million
at
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the first time.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, number, million, household with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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