The bar chart illustrates the manufacturing of coffee in four different regions in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2010.
One stirring feature of the chart is that, from 1990 to 1995 the
cultivating
of Replace the word
cultivation
coffee
in Indonesia and Vietnam remained static. The cultivating
of Replace the word
cultivation
coffee
in Brazil from 1990 to 1995 in 5 years increase approximately from 0.7 million
tones
and reaches one Correct your spelling
tonnes
million
. However
, Columbia shows a downward trend, production
Change preposition
with production
coffee
Change preposition
of coffee
drop
from 0.6 Wrong verb form
dropping
million
tones
to about 0.5 million
tones
.
From 2000 to 2010 Brazil still hold the position of the largest coffee
manufacturer country. Their production
of coffee
crossed just over a
1.8 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
million
tons. Meanwhile, the second leader was Columbia in 2000, but he took last
place in 2010. In one decade, The production
of coffee
in Vietnam and Indonesia progressively increase
and reaches nearly Change the verb form
increases
quarter
Correct article usage
a quarter
million
tones
.
Correct your spelling
tonnes
Overall
, the most striking feature of the chart is the production
of coffee
shoot
up in Brazil, but in Columbia over the period it is Wrong verb form
shot
plummet
. Wrong verb form
plummeting
However
, in Indonesia and Vietnam has increased since 2000 year.Submitted by ayshanngurbanova on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, million, tones, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
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