The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
The line graph depicts the proportion of
the
unemployed Correct article usage
apply
member
of Fix the agreement mistake
members
public
in different countries, namely Add an article
the public
US
and Correct article usage
the US
Japan
in a 6 year
period.
Looking at an Add a hyphen
6-year
overall
formation, it is readily apparent that the indication
exhibited by both countries are distinctly divergent, with the United States Fix the agreement mistake
indications
show
a significant decline in unemployment rates, Wrong verb form
showing
while
Japan
's rates displayed a more moderate yet upward line.
According to
what is shown, the USA
and Japan
had started at around 7% and 2.5% respectively. As there was a significant dip in the unemployment ratio in the USA
during the first three years, there was a gradual climb in Japan
's ratio.
Thereafter
the USA
's proportion fluctuated wildly at about 5.5 percent
until nearly the beginning of 1997, Change the spelling
per cent
while
the proportion in Japan
was increasing
in the same period. Wrong verb form
increased
Consequently
, the two countries'
ratios continued their usual Correct your spelling
countries
behavior
until March 1999 when Change the spelling
behaviour
Japan
exceeded the USA
at about 4.5% and 4% respectively.Submitted by ayshanngurbanova on
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