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The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below give information about the facilities of a university sports court in 1990 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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 the situation and development of a university sports
court
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 in 1990 and the present.
From the
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The
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 first map
which
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apply
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shows
a
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an
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 outdoor swimming
pool
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lied
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lying
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 in the southwest of
sports
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the sports
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court
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. There was a
park
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 which
wes
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was
surroundme
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surrounded
surround me
surround
 by grass near the swimming
pool
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 at the
center
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centre
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. Trees were planted to
park
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round
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around
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 and
car
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a car
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Park
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 was built
in
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on
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 the other side of
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park
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the park
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. On the east side of the outdoor
pool
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were
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was
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cafe
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a cafe
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 and changing room, which offer a resting place to students. The second map demonstrates the great changes
of
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in
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 sports.
These
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This
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 area is divided into two parts. In the eastern part, there is
a
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an
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 indoor activity room. The changing room is built
in
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apply
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between
fitness
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the fitness
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center
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centre
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 and
indoor
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the indoor
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 swimming
pool
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 , which makes
to change
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changing
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 clothes more convenient.
And Cafe
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A cafe
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 and reception are established near the
sport
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sports
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 area.
By contrast
Linking Words
, on the west side of the map are basketball and tennis
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court
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courts
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:
Overall
Linking Words
, in 1990,
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the sport
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sport
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sports
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court
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 was just
a
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an
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 outdoor activity playground. But now,
there
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they
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 are divided into indoor fitness
center
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centers
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 and
ooutdoor
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outdoor
sport playground
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sports playgrounds
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words court, pool, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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