The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps show the considerable alterations between the current layout and the redevelopment
one
in the centre of Islip City. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, it is evident that several buildings will be added, while
a few of the existing sites will persist, including the initial areas for the housing, shops, school, and park.
The roads will be extended and built extensively for a dual carriageway, which will surround the city centre and connect to the pedestrian area
. Moreover
, alongside the new pedestrian area
, some places will be constructed to replace the existing shop area
thoroughly with the new shopping centre, which will be situated in between of new bus station and car park. Likewise
, the shops on the East side will be transformed into a new housing site that is
directly linked to the main road.
However
, the previous housing and shop areas on the south side remain unchanged, although
one new housing area
will be built. Similarly
, the school stays the same and will eventually get more access through the road, whereas
the park size will be reduced.Submitted by hanalyaa29 on
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