In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

In more than one country children suffering from obesity are an increasing concern. I think that an exaggerated consumption of

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food

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is the

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's main reason, but both governments and individuals can tackle the

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with some measures. Nowadays,

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access to

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food

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is easier than ever. The rapid development of the internet has allowed chains of fast

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to reach a wider audience.

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type of

restaurants

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aim to sell a large

amount

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of products with a minimal profit, and cheap prices always tempt people, especially

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these days McDonald's is launching its usual winter promotion, called Winterdays.

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promotion, from the

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days of November to the middle of December, a really valuable promotion on products or menus is promoted each day, and

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brings tons of people to eat more than usual at the restaurant.

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, I believe that there are measures that can be taken in order to address the

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.

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, governments could put havier taxes on

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type of

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.

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would force fast foods to

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their prices and people might be less attracted.

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, individuals, especially parents, must do their part too. In my opinion, individuals should be more conscious

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how much unhealthy

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food

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is and avoid

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it too often.

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, parents should give healthier

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to their children, trying

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to balance

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their

diet. Children should eat vegetables almost every day and it would be better if they

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eating

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at all. In conclusion, I believe that the growing

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childhood obesity should be of primary importance to governments, but

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each person should try to address the

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by himself.