The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provided displays the differences
of
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the
water
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cycle
among
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a forested and an urban layout. At first glance, substantial changes can be observed. The major noticeable differences include infiltration, baseflow, erosion and transpiration.
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pollution is evident within the urban landscape. On the one hand, the forested layout facilitates the
inflitration
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infiltration
of the precipitations throughout the topsoil and subsoil on rock.
After
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this
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, the
water
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table serves as a base that permits the
water
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to flow. The
water
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infiltrated into the soil and the one that remained on the topsoil
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conducted towards a common runoff. The vegetation
easens
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eases
reasons
the
evaportion
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evaporation
and transpiration of
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water
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.
On the other hand
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, in urban
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the infiltration within the up-soil layers is reduced.
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, the
water
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's baseflow is
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diminished, since the vast majority of the precipitations remain on the subsoil on rock.
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produced a significant erosion on the ground.
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, the urban layout increases the pollution
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water
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,
as well as
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reduces the transpiration and evaporation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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