The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The polyline graph illustrates the proportion of visitors who visited
Art
Correct article usage
an Art
gallery
, Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
pavilion
, Fix the agreement mistake
pavilions
pier
and Fix the agreement mistake
piers
festrival
in England especially Brighton from 1980 to 2010.
Correct your spelling
festival
festivals
Overall
, it can be seen that pavilion
and festival were more attractions to visitors than other places. Correct article usage
the pavilion
while
art
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the art
gallery
and pier showes
the lower Correct your spelling
show
pescentage
among the four attractions.
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percentage
To begin
, In 1980, the perceatage
of tourists in Correct your spelling
percentage
pavilion
and festival were around 24% and 30% respectively. The proportion of Correct article usage
the pavilion
pavilion
increased reached Fix the agreement mistake
pavilions
the
peak Correct article usage
a
for
approximately 48% by 1995 and Change preposition
of
then
dramatically declined to 35% in 2000. Similarly
, proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
festival
slightly dropped to about 24% by 1995 and Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
then
slowly grew to 28% in 2000 and remained steady from 2000 to 2010 .
In detail, the percentage of tourists to Pier was 10% in 1980 and then
fluctuated reached
a peak Wrong verb form
reaching
for
21% by 2010. The Change preposition
of
Last
place was art
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the art
gallery
, started
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which started
for
21% by 1980 and rapidly climbed to 38% in 1985 Change preposition
at
surpassed
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surpassing
pavilion
and festival.
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the pavilion
However
, in 1985, art
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the art
gallery
percentage sharply decreased and become
the lowest percentage Wrong verb form
became
for
9% in 2010 .Change preposition
at
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Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, pavilion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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