The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The polyline graph illustrates the proportion of visitors who visited
Art
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an Art
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gallery
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galleries
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,
pavilion
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pavilions
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,
pier
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piers
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and
festrival
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festival
festivals
in England especially Brighton from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that
pavilion
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the pavilion
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and festival were more attractions to visitors than other places.
while
art
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the art
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gallery
and pier
showes
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show
the lower
pescentage
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percentage
among the four attractions.
To begin
, In 1980, the
perceatage
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percentage
of tourists in
pavilion
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the pavilion
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and festival were around 24% and 30% respectively. The proportion of
pavilion
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pavilions
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increased reached
the
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a
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peak
for
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of
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approximately 48% by 1995 and
then
dramatically declined to 35% in 2000.
Similarly
,
proportion
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the proportion
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of
festival
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festivals
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slightly dropped to about 24% by 1995 and
then
slowly grew to 28% in 2000 and remained steady from 2000 to 2010 . In detail, the percentage of tourists to Pier was 10% in 1980 and
then
fluctuated
reached
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reaching
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a peak
for
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of
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21% by 2010. The
Last
place was
art
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the art
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gallery
,
started
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which started
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for
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at
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21% by 1980 and rapidly climbed to 38% in 1985
surpassed
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surpassing
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pavilion
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the pavilion
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and festival.
However
, in 1985,
art
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the art
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gallery
percentage sharply decreased and
become
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became
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the lowest percentage
for
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at
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9% in 2010 .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, pavilion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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