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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification Discuss both these views and give youn own opinion.

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Nowadays, there is a debate
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 learners should study other subjects despite
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the main ones.
Although
 some argue that it is important to
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focus
 on the main subjects in order to improve your performance, I am in
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with
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 those who think that minor lessons are good for addition as you get to learn more skills. On the one hand, those who support a student to take only the major subject believe that it enables them to perform better. If a learner concentrates on one
course
 and spends all his or her time on it, it allows him/ her to
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focus
 more on what is being taught
as well as
 try to understand. The chances of passing are highly more than those whose
mind
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 are divided.
For example
, research done by
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 John at the University of Bugema showed that 99% of the learners who decide to take only main subjects pass extremely well
due to
 the fact that they are not distracted
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 other things.
However
, learning another skill can be of an advantage
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hence
 supporting the latter view.
On the other hand
, I am in agreement with those who believe that studying other courses on top of your main
course
 is much better because it helps scholars to learn different skills.
That is
 to say, when a scholar takes two
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 at the same it not only enables him or her to have a second option in the field of work but
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also
 helps him to
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 what goes on in another field.
For instance
, when I decided to take nursing as
first
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my first
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 option, I added driving classes
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because
 I needed to know how to drive as it would simplify my life in terms of accessing school and work later on.
Therefore
, studying two courses is better. In Conclusion,
Although
 some people say that concentrating on one
course
 brings good performance, I think that two courses are more beneficial because a student gets a chance to learn other skills that are vital. The State should make it a must at all Universities.
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task achievement
Ensure consistency in argumentation and avoid contradictions.
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Support your main points with more specific examples and evidence.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases more effectively to create smooth transitions between ideas.
coherence cohesion
Your essay includes a clear introduction and conclusion.
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You successfully present both sides of the argument.
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You attempt to use examples to support your points.
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