Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification Discuss both these views and give youn own opinion.

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learners should study other subjects despite

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the main ones.

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some argue that it is important to

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on the main subjects in order to improve your performance, I am in

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those who think that minor lessons are good for addition as you get to learn more skills. On the one hand, those who support a student to take only the major subject believe that it enables them to perform better. If a learner concentrates on one

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and spends all his or her time on it, it allows him/ her to

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try to understand. The chances of passing are highly more than those whose

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are divided.

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, research done by

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John at the University of Bugema showed that 99% of the learners who decide to take only main subjects pass extremely well

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the fact that they are not distracted

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other things.

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, learning another skill can be of an advantage

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supporting the latter view.

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, I am in agreement with those who believe that studying other courses on top of your main

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is much better because it helps scholars to learn different skills.

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to say, when a scholar takes two

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at the same it not only enables him or her to have a second option in the field of work but

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helps him to

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what goes on in another field.

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, when I decided to take nursing as

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option, I added driving classes

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I needed to know how to drive as it would simplify my life in terms of accessing school and work later on.

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, studying two courses is better. In Conclusion,

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some people say that concentrating on one

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brings good performance, I think that two courses are more beneficial because a student gets a chance to learn other skills that are vital. The State should make it a must at all Universities.