There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter: Describe the problems Explain how these problems are affecting the public Suggest some changes that could be made Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Hello MR Osama , I would like to write
this
email in order to show you how i
am interested in your Change the capitalization
I
jop
.
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job
Firstly
, I haven't ever work
as Change the verb form
worked
activity
Correct article usage
an activity
assistance
, Replace the word
assistant
However
, I always want to try to work in a new experience specific this
, Because , My mother has been working for 20 years as Change preposition
to this
assistance
Replace the word
assistant
children
, Change preposition
for children
Therefore
, she support
me Correct subject-verb agreement
supports
to take
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in taking
this
experience.
secondly
, I have many experiences ,But, I am going to tell experiences realate
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related
with
your Change preposition
to
jop
, The Correct your spelling
job
fisrt
one , I have worked as a teacher for 7 years , Correct your spelling
first
In addition
, i
have worked Change the capitalization
I
as
student services for Change preposition
in
couples
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couple
years
.
Change preposition
of years
Finally
, I would like to write Change preposition
about my
my
skills which Change the word
the
i
got Change the capitalization
I
it
from Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
past experiences . I can manage the children and support them if someone Correct article usage
apply
false
, Correct your spelling
fails
Moreover
, i
will make them self-confidence more than now , Change the capitalization
I
Also
, I love playing with the children while
i
teach them ,Change the capitalization
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Therefore
, in my opinion
we will get great Add a comma
opinion,
result
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results
Also
great students.
Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you .
Osama AlshubrmiSubmitted by osama.mezal7 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear idea to improve coherence.
task achievement
Be clearer in describing specific problems with the public transport system to improve task achievement.
task achievement
Aim to provide solutions that directly address the described issues for a more complete response.
task achievement
Your letter generally maintains a polite and formal tone, suitable for a letter to a transport company manager.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for the context, contributing to a sense of completeness in the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,