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The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The line graph illustrates how much
waste
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 was generated by three different companies between 2000 and 2015. At the beginning of the period,
company
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 A had the largest figure, with 12
tonnes
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 of
waste
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. At the same time , companies B and C stood at 8 and 4
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 production, respectively, in 2000.
Company
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 A experienced a consistent decline over the period, reaching just 8
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 2015.
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, the figures for
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 B rose significantly until 2005.
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, they dropped sharply, reaching just 3
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 production by the end of the year. The
waste
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 production of
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 C saw a rapid increase at 6
waste
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tonnes
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 in 2005. After that ,
this
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 rate continued to grow quickly over
the
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15 years
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reaching approximately 10
waste
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in
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
This
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 figure has been the highest point over the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste production
  • company
  • trends
  • significant
  • fluctuations
  • surges
  • reductions
  • correlations
  • environmental policies
  • technological advancements
  • units of measurement
  • time period
  • stability
  • milestones
  • graph analysis
  • pattern recognition
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