The pie charts below show the selected causes of death as a percentage of all deaths of registered Indians and the total population in 1992.
The chart provides information about the reasons for
death
in India in 1992.
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Overall
, it is evident that the bigger causes were accidents and other factors, Linking Words
whereas
the lower ones were heart disease and cancer.
Looking in more detail, the accident was the highest percentage of causes of Linking Words
death
at around 44%. Use synonyms
In addition
, people died from other factors which comprised about 26.4%. Linking Words
However
, homicide was significantly low in terms of the reasons for Linking Words
death
, it accounted for approximately 14%.
With regard to the remaining causes, suicide was Use synonyms
also
a mortality reason in India, which took up about 8.1%. Linking Words
In addition
, cancer deaths made up almost 5.3% in 1992. Linking Words
Furthermore
, cardiovascular diseases were the least Linking Words
death
reason which comprised about 2%.Use synonyms
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