Low-price airlines lack most of the conveniences of normal air plane flights. However, the prices of the tickets are usually lower.Discuss negative and positive aspects of having lower rates of air plane tickets for travellers. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your response.
#airlines #lack #conveniences #air #plane #flights #prices #tickets #aspects #rates #travellers #support
Nowadays,
people
have started to travel by means of air to save time. However
, due to
the high prices of tickets
, it is not an economical option for everyone. That’s why some people
prefer to buy lower prices of tickets
. In my opinion, tickets
which are very cheap can be uncomfortable and dangerous for people
while
it
can Correct pronoun usage
they
also
create a chance to travel easily. This
essay will discuss both merits and demerits of low-priced airplanes
in detail.
Change the spelling
aeroplanes
Firstly
, the main benefits of cheap tickets
for travelling by air are chances for travelling around the world. People
can easily visit other cities or countries as well as
learn about different cultures, traditions and customs. These can add to people
enriching experience Change noun form
people's
while
experience can help to
Change preposition
apply
people
improve their knowledge and personality. For example
, according to
the survey, travelled people
55
% increase compared to Add a missing verb
is 55
last
5 years with the help of lower-priced Correct article usage
the last
airplanes
companies.
Change the noun form
airplane
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages of low-fare airlines. Sometimes lower
price airlines can Correct word choice
apply
be
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
quality Change preposition
apply
as well as
it can be unsafety for Add an article
the traveler
a traveler
traveler
. Seats can be uncomfortable and safety belts can be damaged, Fix the agreement mistake
travelers
this
can cause dangerous situations not only for customers also
Correct word choice
but also
pilots
, staff and companies. Change preposition
for pilots
Additionally
, meals and snacks for passengers can be tasteless and overdue. For instance
, in 2002, in Uzbekistan Airlines, many people
to be
poisoned Change the verb form
were
due to
overdue snacks which
shared by that airline company.
In conclusion, low-priced Correct pronoun usage
apply
tickets
for travelling can be
create both beneficial and dangerous Unnecessary verb
apply
situation
for passengers. It can encourage to Fix the agreement mistake
situations
people
for travelling
and gain new Verb problem
travel
experience
Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
while
it can be uncomfortable
and unsafety journey for Correct article usage
an uncomfortable
people
.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
In future essays, aim to provide more specific examples and elaborate on your ideas to reach a comprehensive task response.
coherence cohesion
Your main points are clear and well-supported, but consider adding transitions to improve the flow of your arguments.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which effectively summarize the main points of the essay.
task achievement
The essay addresses both the positives and negatives of low-cost airlines effectively.