Low-price airlines lack most of the conveniences of normal air plane flights. However, the prices of the tickets are usually lower.Discuss negative and positive aspects of having lower rates of air plane tickets for travellers. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your response.

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Nowadays,

people

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have started to travel by means of air to save time.

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due to

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the high prices of

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, it is not an economical option for everyone. That’s why some

people

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prefer to buy lower prices of

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. In my opinion,

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which are very cheap can be uncomfortable and dangerous for

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while

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can

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create a chance to travel easily.

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essay will discuss both merits and demerits of low-priced

airplanes

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in detail.

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, the main benefits of cheap

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for travelling by air are chances for travelling around the world.

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can easily visit other cities or countries

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learn about different cultures, traditions and customs. These can add to

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people

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enriching experience

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experience can help

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people

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improve their knowledge and personality.

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according to

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the survey, travelled

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% increase compared to

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5 years with the help of lower-priced

airplanes

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companies.

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, there are several disadvantages of low-fare airlines. Sometimes

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price airlines can

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lack

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quality

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it can be unsafety for

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traveler

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. Seats can be uncomfortable and safety belts can be damaged,

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can cause dangerous situations not only for customers

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also

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pilots

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, staff and companies.

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, meals and snacks for passengers can be tasteless and overdue.

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, in 2002, in Uzbekistan Airlines, many

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to be

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poisoned

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overdue snacks

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shared by that airline company. In conclusion, low-priced

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for travelling can

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create both beneficial and dangerous

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situations

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for passengers. It can encourage to

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for travelling

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and gain new

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experiences

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it can be

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and unsafety journey for

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The essay addresses both the positives and negatives of low-cost airlines effectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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277 words

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