What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas, and how can they be solved?
In the modern era,
people
who live in cities have more benefits than in villages. And is affecting rural areas
. There are some problems like agriculture production is letting down, economically poor. we will discuss in this
essay with solutions.
To begin
with, people
who live in big cities for their development
but it has opposed the rural areas
, especially agriculture is the backbone of our country, here we lose the production in a village
. For instance
, recently the government has announced that agricultural farmers are decreasing by 4% compared to the last
five years, if this
repeats, we will lose the food manufacturing process. Additionally
, in villages schools, colleges and transport systems are dumped due to
many people
going to the city
with family for their career growth so economically in rural areas
are letting down quickly, and is not encourageable for development
.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions to solve the problems for rural Change noun form
areas'
area's
areas
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areas'
development
. The government should take care of the people
who are living in the villages, they need to construct schools, colleges, factories and enough facilities for the people
. For instance
, one of my cousins lives in a village
, that area has a lot of facilities to have for the people
so he and his family have not gone to the city
side. Apart from
this
, people
who live in a village
have to work more for their village
to develop than a city
. In my opinion, I would recommend living in a village
has more benefits for growth.
To conclude
, people
who live in the city
have more benefits and in a village
there are some problems like agricultural development
as well as
economic development
but the government taking better actions to prevent people
from migrating to the city
and they have to develop a village
, following these to be more advantages for a village
growth.Submitted by saravanan.ko2011 on
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