The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map represents the future plan for substituting a region of factories for housing.
Overall
, the region will consist of houses and facilities that offer services for people who settle in those houses.
Currently, the map illustrates a number of factories located around the rotating road
, and some of them around the branch of land that originates from the rotating road
.
The next plan is to build accommodations instead
of factories. Additionally
, the construction of a bridge that connects the centre of the region with the farmland in the north. The bridge will cross the river, and it will connect between the houses in the farmland and the rotating road
. This
area will comprise some facilities, such
as a medical centre, playground, school, and shops.
In the south, a new rotating road
will be established in order to join the developed area by the rotating road
in the north and the southern main road
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