The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
of people who married and divorced in the USA, the Use synonyms
UK
, Use synonyms
Japan
, Finland, Use synonyms
Germany
, France, Italy and Use synonyms
Denmark
from 1981 to 1994.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that marriage Linking Words
statistics
declined in all countries except Use synonyms
Denmark
it increased. Use synonyms
While
the divorce statistic climbed except in the USA and Linking Words
Denmark
dropped Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Germany
remained steady during the time period.
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To begin
, in the USA the Linking Words
number
of marriages and divorces was exactly the same, reaching a peak of approximately 10, 5 Use synonyms
thousand
and Use synonyms
then
decreasing to 9000 by 1981 and 1994. Linking Words
furthermore
, marriage Linking Words
statistics
slightly declined in the Use synonyms
UK
, Use synonyms
Japan
, Finland, Use synonyms
Germany
, France and Italy throughout the whole frame time. Use synonyms
In Contrast
, Linking Words
Denmark
was the only Country which showed growth in their marriage Statistic of around 5 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1981 to 6,5 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1994 .
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On the other hand
, in 1981, the divorce Linking Words
Statistics
in the Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Japan
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was
3.8 and 1.2 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
thousand
respectively. Use synonyms
then
rise to over 3000 in the Linking Words
UK
and in Use synonyms
Japan
1,4 Use synonyms
thousand
by 1994.
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As well as
, in Finland, France and Italy the Linking Words
number
of divorces increased from 1981 to 1994. In Use synonyms
Germany
, the Use synonyms
number
of divorces Use synonyms
remain
Steady Change the verb form
remains
for
exactly 2 Change preposition
at
thousand
in the whole time period. Use synonyms
Additionally
, in Linking Words
Denmark
, the Use synonyms
statistics
slowly Climbed between 1981 and 1994 from about 2,9 to 2,8 Use synonyms
thousand
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, uk, japan, germany, denmark, statistics, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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