The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
of people who married and divorced in the USA, the UK
, Japan
, Finland, Germany
, France, Italy and Denmark
from 1981 to 1994.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that marriage statistics
declined in all countries except Denmark
it increased. While
the divorce statistic climbed except in the USA and Denmark
dropped while
Germany
remained steady during the time period.
To begin
, in the USA the number
of marriages and divorces was exactly the same, reaching a peak of approximately 10, 5 thousand
and then
decreasing to 9000 by 1981 and 1994. furthermore
, marriage statistics
slightly declined in the UK
, Japan
, Finland, Germany
, France and Italy throughout the whole frame time. In Contrast
, Denmark
was the only Country which showed growth in their marriage Statistic of around 5 thousand
in 1981 to 6,5 thousand
in 1994 .
On the other hand
, in 1981, the divorce Statistics
in the UK
and Japan
was
3.8 and 1.2 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
thousand
respectively. then
rise to over 3000 in the UK
and in Japan
1,4 thousand
by 1994.
As well as
, in Finland, France and Italy the number
of divorces increased from 1981 to 1994. In Germany
, the number
of divorces remain
Steady Change the verb form
remains
for
exactly 2 Change preposition
at
thousand
in the whole time period. Additionally
, in Denmark
, the statistics
slowly Climbed between 1981 and 1994 from about 2,9 to 2,8 thousand
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