Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not poy tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
Some factions of
people
Use synonyms
argues
that they have to save the Change the verb form
argue
money
which has earned for themselves and should not pay Use synonyms
money
to the Use synonyms
government
for country expenses. I strongly agree that paying taxes is not necessary for the majority of Use synonyms
people
and it must be voluntary .
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Firstly
, Linking Words
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government
must have a better way to earn its own budgets like exports, power production and global dealing. it can be as an offer that some Add an article
the government
people
help the Use synonyms
government
with special activities Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
construction
of public places. Add an article
the construction
Therefore
has not to be Linking Words
force
and the Wrong verb form
forced
government
is responsible to do and provide all Use synonyms
facility
which are Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
people
's welfare Use synonyms
such
as hospitals, universities and Linking Words
quality
of roads. Correct article usage
the quality
People
can spend their own total salary on their personal activities like buying a Use synonyms
caror
, Correct your spelling
car
Correct word choice
or housea
housea
house and Correct your spelling
a
also
save for far future.
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In other words
, Linking Words
people
try hard and spend their precious lives to make Use synonyms
money
for their children. It is completely wrong that they work as worker and over time pay large amounts of their budget to the Use synonyms
government
for receiving first needs. Use synonyms
Although
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people
with moderate classification do not pay Use synonyms
money
as a tax, rich Use synonyms
people
who own large factories and mines must pay Use synonyms
money
to their country, Use synonyms
whereas
they use natural sources and sometimes, Linking Words
the
damage nature, so officials are responsible for rebuilding them requires Correct your spelling
they
money
.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
this
opinion Linking Words
which
points out Correct pronoun usage
apply
to pay
Change preposition
that paying
money
as a tax is really unfair. I believe that most of the Use synonyms
people
who are poor and normal Use synonyms
people
must not pay taxes. Use synonyms
However
, those Linking Words
people
who have very high incomes pay Use synonyms
money
to help their country and Use synonyms
government
.Use synonyms
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