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The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the world's ten most expensive
countries
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 for oil
as well as
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 other economic statistics.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the typical monthly petrol expenditure is nearly the same among these
countries
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.
Nevertheless
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, the percentage of
income
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 spent on petrol each month is
extremly
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extremely
 changeable
due to
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 the differences in the average monthly
income
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 which is disposable in these
countries
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. The usual expenditure on oil each month among these
countries
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 stands between $273.05 and $319.85.
However
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, these ten
countries
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 could be divided into two groups. The first
including
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countries
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 in which the typical monthly
income
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 is higher than $2500. The other group is comprised of those
countries
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 that have an average monthly
income
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 lower than $2000. The highest
income
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 belongs to Norway with $4329.07,
while
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 Eritrea experiences the lowest one ($450.09). The first group, including Norway, Holland, Denmark, Britain, Sweden and Belgium, has a percentage of
income
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 spent on petrol
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 under 10%, except for Britain (10.3%).
On the other hand
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, the second group, formed by Italy, Turkey, Greece and Eritrea, sees higher percentages, ranging from 15.50% in Italy to 61.10% in Eritrea.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographical distribution
  • per capita income
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • correlate
  • anomalies
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
  • external factors
  • oil production rates
  • import dependencies
  • subsidies
  • taxation policies
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