Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, government should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, there have been accompanying issues with smoking which can be a considerable cause of severe physical

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issues. There are some

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who believe that accepting smoking tobacco products including cigarettes should be regulated by

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increases a massive risk for society members in indirect smoking including

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can be considered as overstepping if a law might be established at the

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level.

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reason, I have different viewpoints from them. First of all,

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is undeniable that smoking behaviour has a number of negative impacts on public

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, especially the young generation.

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the fact that young

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might be exposed to harmful places where adults smoke regardless if there are

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around them.

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young individuals under a certain age

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as 18 are still restricted from smoking cigarettes, they cannot be free from other adults' impacts.

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would have an enormous impact on

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's physical

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. As a severe example,

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who have parents smoking might have a high possibility of having severe cancers which can be caused by indirect experience of smoking from their parents.

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is a significant issue for

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, most governments in the world have not put any regulations on selling, buying, and smoking tobacco-related products.

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is because governments cannot limit all-grown individuals' choices in the light of human rights. In the UN's human rights

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, the sentence can be found that governments should respect individuals' choices.

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reason, creating new rules in society would lead to

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's voices who disagree and resist the

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which might bring different social issues to the public.

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always carry their responsibility to minimise harm to

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who do not smoke

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and non-smokers among adults by legally appointing smoke-free areas or smoking areas for public

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, it cannot be marginalised that smoking and selling cigarettes might bring an undeniable issue, especially among young peers.

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should not be neglected that restricting smoking with the regulation might infringe human rights standing against respecting

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's choices which I am partly in the same vein.