In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantagous?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Recent technological advancements have transformed
human's
Change noun form
human
show examples
lifestyle
Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
show examples
, and
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
transportation vehicles are
one
Use synonyms
of the
area
Change to a plural noun
areas
show examples
that
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
show examples
been altered markedly. In
this
Linking Words
regard, some argue that
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
future vehicles will be
drived
Correct your spelling
driven
derived
by computers
equipted
Correct your spelling
equipped
with artificial
inteligance
Correct your spelling
intelligence
, and people will be only the passengers without intermediation in the control of the
cars
Use synonyms
and trucks. I believe, the pros of smart
cars
Use synonyms
overweighs
Verb problem
outweigh
show examples
the
its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
cons because of the rise in
cars
Use synonyms
' capacities reduction and
decrease
Correct article usage
the decrease
show examples
in
car
Use synonyms
accidents
Use synonyms
.
Firstly
Linking Words
, as human as
driver
Add an article
the driver
a driver
show examples
is
omited
Correct your spelling
omitted
in
cars
Use synonyms
;
then
Linking Words
more passengers can use a
car
Use synonyms
.
Although
Linking Words
one
Use synonyms
more passenger seems to be a negligible issue in the reduction of commuting costs,
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
large scale, it would have a remarkable effect since the capacity of a
car
Use synonyms
with 4 vacant sits to 5. For
an
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
example, consider a city with
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
5 thousand taxis; with
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
driverless taxis, they would
1000
Add a missing verb
be 1000
show examples
free
sits
Correct your spelling
seats
show examples
for those who want to
commut
Correct your spelling
commit
commute
.
This
Linking Words
is
one
Use synonyms
reason why
self-drived
Correct your spelling
self-driving
self-driven
cars
Use synonyms
will be beneficial.
Second,
Linking Words
utilizing transportation tools
drived
Correct your spelling
driven
derived
by AI
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
can reduce
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
car
Use synonyms
accidents
Use synonyms
notably. AI is not only more accurate than
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
show examples
but it
also
Linking Words
is not going to be tired
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
driving long distances.
Therefore
Linking Words
, the combination of accuracy and robustness has the potential to decay the
car
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
accidents'
Change noun form
accidents
show examples
rate sharply. As we can see today, currently, worriers have used drones with an independent
inteligence
Correct your spelling
intelligence
in attacking enemies, which are more successful than
the
Remove the article
apply
show examples
their
predecisors contred
Correct your spelling
predecessors controlled
by
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
show examples
.
Although
Linking Words
using
driveles
Correct your spelling
driverless
cars
Use synonyms
can have
undesireable
Correct your spelling
undesirable
outcomes,
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
show examples
they can be manageable.
This
Linking Words
is always a doubt for computer science
scientifics
Correct your spelling
scientists
if
one
Use synonyms
AI does not follow our commands.
To sum up
Linking Words
, in my
opinion
Add a comma
opinion,
show examples
smart vehicles will be fruitful for us since
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
would cause more
passangers
Correct your spelling
passengers
located in comparison to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
ordinary
cars
Use synonyms
as well as
Linking Words
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
will lower the number of
accidents
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
roads.
Submitted by faraisam33 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement
Try to proofread your essay to correct small grammatical errors and typos, such as 'drived' instead of 'driven' and 'equipted' instead of 'equipped'.
task achievement
Make sure to provide more specific examples to support your points. For instance, citing research or studies on driverless cars and their impact would strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear structure by using paragraphs wisely. Ensure each paragraph has a single focus and transitions smoothly to the next point.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in framing your points effectively.
task achievement
You identify the main advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles with relevant reasoning.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: