The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows data on the number of immigrants (in thousand
unit
) to the USA, Canada, and Australia from 1991 to 2001.
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Overall
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while
Canada and Australia had a quite stable trend, the opposite was true for the USA, which Linking Words
also
possessed the largest immigration rate.
In terms of America, there were over 1400 people Linking Words
immigrated
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who immigrated
in
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nation in 1991. After reaching a peak of 1800 Linking Words
in
only one year later, the data of Change preposition
apply
this
country witnessed a dramatic fall, to only 1000 immigrants in 1993, Linking Words
then
continued to be followed by a gradual decrease during the next 3 years. From 1996 onwards, the immigration rate Linking Words
of
the USA fluctuated from around 650 to 990 individuals.
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In contrast
, Canada’s and Australia’s immigration level was reported to be less varied. In Australia, there were approximately 180 people moved here annually throughout the Linking Words
10 years
period. A similar trend was Correct your spelling
10-year
also
documented in Canada’s data, albeit at a quite higher Linking Words
firgure
, at around 200 individuals. Correct your spelling
figure
Addtionally
, a double increase in Correct your spelling
Additionally
this
country’s level was Linking Words
also
recorded Linking Words
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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