The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.
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The
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chart illustrates the making of olive
oil
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.
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, the human-controlled
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, consisting of seven stages, starts with the gathering of olive fruits from trees and ends
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with the sale of the olive
oil
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to consumers. The
oil
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fruits picked by farmers are transferred to the washing equipment, which rinses them with cold water. Once olives have been washed, they are sent over the belt to the grinding pot. By smashing them,
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equipment separates the olive
paste
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from the olive pits.
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, the
paste
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is pushed into the punctured bags to enable
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further
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processing,
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the stones with some flesh are to be used for consumption. In the following stages, the
process
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of transformation of olive
paste
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into
oil
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starts. Having been separated from
oil
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stones, the bags filled with the
paste
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undergo the pressing
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with
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separation of
oil
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from water. The
oil
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is the final product of
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entire manufacturing
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, and it is bottled, packed, and transported to the storage houses to be sold to consumers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, oil, paste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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