The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.
The
process
chart illustrates the making of olive Use synonyms
oil
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the human-controlled Linking Words
process
, consisting of seven stages, starts with the gathering of olive fruits from trees and ends Use synonyms
up
with the sale of the olive Change preposition
apply
oil
to consumers.
The Use synonyms
oil
fruits picked by farmers are transferred to the washing equipment, which rinses them with cold water. Once olives have been washed, they are sent over the belt to the grinding pot. By smashing them, Use synonyms
this
equipment separates the olive Linking Words
paste
from the olive pits. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
paste
is pushed into the punctured bags to enable Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
further
processing, Linking Words
while
the stones with some flesh are to be used for consumption.
In the following stages, the Linking Words
process
of transformation of olive Use synonyms
paste
into Use synonyms
oil
starts. Having been separated from Use synonyms
oil
stones, the bags filled with the Use synonyms
paste
undergo the pressing Use synonyms
process
with Use synonyms
further
separation of Linking Words
oil
from water. The Use synonyms
oil
is the final product of Use synonyms
this
entire manufacturing Linking Words
process
, and it is bottled, packed, and transported to the storage houses to be sold to consumers.Use synonyms
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