The line graph shows the average prices of tickets sold at a theatre and the bar chart shows the average percentage of tickets sold in 2010 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the average prices of tickets sold at a theatre and the bar chart shows the average percentage of tickets sold in 2010 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data presents the general
sales
of tickets at a theatre using the pound as a unit.
Additionally
, the bar chart gives information about the proportion of ticket
sales
from 2010 to 2011.
Overall
, there was a fluctuating trend in the prices of the tickets at a movie place.
Also
, the percentage of
sales
was visibly higher during the fourth
quarter
of the covered years. In detail, ticket prices started just above 9
pounds
in the first and
second
quarter
of the initial year,
however
, there was a sudden significant incline to 10.5
pounds
in the third
quarter
.
This
price remained stable up until the
second
quarter
of the following year when it slowly declined to a little more than 10
pounds
.
Conversely
, it went up again after the 3rd
quarter
mirroring its previous amount at 10.5
pounds
.
Furthermore
, in 2010, the percentage of ticket
sales
was equal from the first to
second
quarter
at 60%. About 10% was decreased in the next
quarter
, but it increased to 80% in the
last
quarter
of that year. In comparison to 2011,
although
, the initial and
second
quarter
’s proportions were still similar, it went down to 20% from the first to the
second
quarter
which was 40% lower than its fraction in 2010.
Finally
, it was slowly rising reaching more than 60% in the
last
quarter
of 2011.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, quarter, pounds, second with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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