The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
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The diagram displays the information on resource air
pollution
in the UK from 1990 to over 15 years.
Overall
, total pollutants decreased in the Industry and household sectors
while
transport remained stagnant. In 1990,
pollution
reached an all-time higher with around 7 million tonnes with the biggest contribution coming from factories or manufacturing companies. Afterwards, households and transport started at the same point at below 2 million tonnes. After 3 years, the movement of contamination of air shows significant progress. Between 1993 and 2006, Industry decreased rapidly in production of
pollution
until reached half of their total
pollution
in 1990, followed by households that fell slightly.
Moreover
, those sectors showed a downtrend until the end of 2005, which impacted the volume of all pollutants that had desperately reduced, yet from 1999 to 2002 had stagnated period for a
while
,
then
continued to fall and
finally
stood at below 4 million tonnes.
However
, on the transportation side, they tended to maintain their output until 2005,
although
had a small fluctuation every 3 years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pollution with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Pollutants
  • Contributing factors
  • Industrial processes
  • Transport sector
  • Household energy
  • Agricultural activities
  • Percentage change
  • Decade
  • Reduction
  • Increase
  • Significantly
  • Fluctuations
  • Trends
  • Sustainable practices
  • Environmental policy
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