The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graphs present the average of daily maximal and minimal

temperature

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in

Brisbane

and Canberra.

This

also

includes the average

number

of

rainfall

in these two cities.

Overall

, the maximum and minimum temperatures in two Australian cities within a year are fluctuating.

Additionally

, there is

also

an unstable

number

of

days

with

rainfall

in

Brisbane

and Canberra. In detail,

Brisbane

’s maximum

temperature

from around 28

°C

in

January

increased by 10

°C

in

February

,

however

, it is suddenly dropping to more than 20

°C

in April.

This

went up in May by around 3

°C

but

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again until July to greater than 20

°C

.

Moreover

, from

then

, it slowly

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continuously until

December

at less than 30

°C

. The city

experience

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a minimum

temperature

of roughly 22

°C

in

January

then

it moderately

drop

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until August at 10

°C

. In the

last

4 months of the year, the

temperature

gradually goes up until

December

reaching 20

°C

. In comparison, Canberra’s maximum

temperature

during

January

and

February

is

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between 30

°C

and 25

°C

. There is a rapid considerable fall in

temperature

reaching a low point in July at just above 10

°C

. After July, the

temperature

quickly goes up until

December

reaching an equal

temperature

during the first 2 months. The minimum

temperature

in

this

city starts at nearly 13

°C

from

January

to

February

and

then

a rapid decline until July at approximately 3

°C

that

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it

rise

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rises

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again until

December

at around 12

°C

.

The

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average

number

of

rainfall

, it is noticeable that the peak

rainfall

month for

Brisbane

is in

February

and March at 14

days

while

the lowest is every June to September with

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number

of about 7

days

. Meanwhile, in Canberra, the highest

rainfall

is experience

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for 10

days

in the months of June to August

while

the lowest

days

of approximately 7

days

like in

Brisbane

happen mostly half a year.