The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graphs present the average of daily maximal and minimal

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temperature

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in

Brisbane

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and Canberra.

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also

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includes the average

number

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of

rainfall

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in these two cities.

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, the maximum and minimum temperatures in two Australian cities within a year are fluctuating.

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, there is

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an unstable

number

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of

days

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with

rainfall

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in

Brisbane

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and Canberra. In detail,

Brisbane

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’s maximum

temperature

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from around 28

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in

January

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increased by 10

°C

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in

February

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,

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, it is suddenly dropping to more than 20

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in April.

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went up in May by around 3

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but

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again until July to greater than 20

°C

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.

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, from

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, it slowly

incline

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continuously until

December

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at less than 30

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. The city

experience

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a minimum

temperature

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of roughly 22

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in

January

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then

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it moderately

drop

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until August at 10

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. In the

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4 months of the year, the

temperature

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gradually goes up until

December

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reaching 20

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. In comparison, Canberra’s maximum

temperature

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during

January

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and

February

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is

in

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between 30

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and 25

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. There is a rapid considerable fall in

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reaching a low point in July at just above 10

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. After July, the

temperature

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quickly goes up until

December

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reaching an equal

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during the first 2 months. The minimum

temperature

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in

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city starts at nearly 13

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from

January

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to

February

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and

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a rapid decline until July at approximately 3

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that

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it

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rises

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again until

December

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at around 12

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.

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average

number

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of

rainfall

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, it is noticeable that the peak

rainfall

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month for

Brisbane

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is in

February

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and March at 14

days

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while

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the lowest is every June to September with

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number

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of about 7

days

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. Meanwhile, in Canberra, the highest

rainfall

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is experience

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for 10

days

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in the months of June to August

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the lowest

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of approximately 7

days

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like in

Brisbane

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happen mostly half a year.