The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010

The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and

2010
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The bar chart compares reasons for missing work or study,which were made by citizens of one European country between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
although
some absenteeisms' per cent declined, family responsibilities and unexpected situations did not change in the
last
half-decade. At the outset,if 45% of people did not go to their workplaces
as a result
of illnesses in 2000,
this
number decreased equally till 2010 (35% in 2010).
Additionally
, despite the workers and students' percentage falling to 5 from 6 ,because of stress in 2005,it jumped almost 3 times 5 years later.
Moreover
,after growing to 22% from 15% in 2005,because of personal needs,like appointments,people's scores went down by 2%
at the end
of the period. In spite of approximately 30% of people giving family responsibilities as a reason in 2000,
this
data dropped to 24% in the next 10 years.
Furthermore
, 10% of humans faced unexpected problems in 2000,though it climbed to nearly 17% in the next decade.
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