Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every five years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

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It is
ofren
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often
argued that it ought to be mandatory for
drivers
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to retake the driving
test
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again every
five
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years
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. The main benefits are
people
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will get updated knowledge about road rules and authorities can identify
the
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dengerous
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dangerous
drives;
however
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, the key drawbacks are
waste
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a waste
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of
time
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for both
drivers
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and examiners and create a huge waiting
peried
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period
for
people
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who
waiting
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to get their licenses. On the one hand, legalizing the driving
test
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for
evey
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every
over
five
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years
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,
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apply
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provides a lot of advantages.
Firstly
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, the
drivers
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can upgrade their
knowledege
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knowledge
about rules and regulations because most of the rules and regulations change over the period, especially
urban
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in urban
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area
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areas
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.
For instance
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, hook turn has
introdued
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introduced
in Colombo Sri Lanka
last
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year but most of the
drivers
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were not
awared
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aware
of it. So, when the law imposed, every
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drivers
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driver
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shoud
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should
be learn
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be learned
be learning
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those updated laws and
regualtions
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regulations
,
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otherwise
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otherwise,
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they may
fails
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fail
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the driving
test
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.
Scondly
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Secondly
,
due to
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change
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changes
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of
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in
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people
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's health, some
drivers
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bocome
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become
unqualified to drive. These
people
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can identify when
mandate
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apply
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the
test
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every
five
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years
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.
Moreover
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, the reaction
time
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is declining, especially for elderly
drivers
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.
Hence
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, the authorities can identify
the
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apply
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dengerous
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dangerous
drivers
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easily, if the driving
test
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compulsory
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is compulsory
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.
On the other hand
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,
There
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there
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are some disadvantages
may
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that may
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occure
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occur
,
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apply
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if the
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five year
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five-year
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rule
impose
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is imposed
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by the government. One of the main
issue
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issues
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is
that
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the
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waste of
time
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, especially for the
drivers
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. As an example, to get
the
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a
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driving
license
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in Sri Lanka, the
drivers
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have to spend more than a week
for
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on
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the process. If they have to do
this
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process every
five
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years
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, the total labour force wasting may
uncountable
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and it directly
affect
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affects
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in
countrie's
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countries
country's
development. Not only that, the demand for
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license
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licenses
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will
skyrocketing
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and a huge
que
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queue
will be developed.
This
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will negatively affect in young generation who waiting to get their first
license
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and they start driving without
qualifed
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qualified
as a driver. In
conlusion
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conclusion
,
drivers
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can update their knowledge and authorities can identify unqualified
drivers
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when mandate the
license
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test
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every
five
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years
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,
however
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,
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time wasting
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time-wasting
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and creating
a
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an
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uncotrolable
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uncontrollable
uncontrollably
waiting
time
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to get
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license
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a license
the license
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for younger
people
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are the
unavodable
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unavoidable
circumstances.
Therefore
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, the government should measure the positive and negative effects before
implement
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implementing
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this
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rule.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • retake
  • enhanced
  • mitigation
  • logistical challenges
  • financial burden
  • capabilities
  • independence
  • stress and anxiety
  • reinforcement
  • road rules
  • administrative
  • insurance premiums
  • decline
  • government agencies
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