The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart

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the proportion of Australian

men

And women in different

age

groups who did regular physical

activity

in 2010.

Overall

, it can be seen that the female

age

group was the

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in

this

chart-higher

percentage

among others. Only 15 to 24

men

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the highest

percentage

than other ages,

whereas

other ages

men

activity

was the lowest from women in 2008.

To begin

with,

45

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to 54

age

female

activity

percentage

was the topper at 53.3%,

whereas

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44

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age

of male

percentage

of 39.5, which was the lowest

percentage

from

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female

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females

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. 52.5% of female regular

activity

percentage

stood at second position,

while

men

activity

was 42.2%. On the other side, female did their regular

activity

(55 to 64

age

)

53

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%, and male did their

activity

45.1

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at 45.1

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% was the least. As to 65 and over,

men

and

female

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females

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did their regular

activity

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activities

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were similar with 46.7% male and

female

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47.1%. Only 15 to 24

age

of

male

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males

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did their

activity

52.8% which was the

hightest

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highest

percentage

from other ages male.