The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar graph illustrates the information on expected
illiteracy
rates in various parts of the world for the year 2000. Overall
, it is obvious that across the globe, men have a higher level of literacy than women.
Turning to the details, for men, a tiny proportion of illiteracy
is observed in developed countries, otherwise
, countries in Latin America and East Asia
showed less than 10 per cent
of uneducated males. It is clear that
the number of illiterate males is the highest in South Asia
, Arab states and Sub-Saharan Africa at approximately 30 per cent
.
Nevertheless
, for females, the lowest illiteracy
level of less than 5 per cent
is observed in developed countries. However
, as can be seen in East Asia
and Latin America somewhat 20 per cent
of women are uneducated. Meanwhile, in South Asia
, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa, the illiteracy
rate is substantially high with around half of the female population being illiterate.
In conclusion, literacy level differs between genders and across regions of the worldSubmitted by nabilahabdmalek3452 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, asia, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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