The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The bar graph illustrates the information on expected
illiteracy
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rates in various parts of the world for the year 2000.
Overall
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, it is obvious that across the globe, men have a higher level of literacy than women. Turning to the details, for men, a tiny proportion of
illiteracy
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is observed in developed countries,
otherwise
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, countries in Latin America and East
Asia
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showed less than 10 per
cent
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of uneducated males.
It is clear that
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the number of illiterate males is the highest in South
Asia
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, Arab states and Sub-Saharan Africa at approximately 30 per
cent
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.
Nevertheless
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, for females, the lowest
illiteracy
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level of less than 5 per
cent
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is observed in developed countries.
However
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, as can be seen in East
Asia
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and Latin America somewhat 20 per
cent
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of women are uneducated. Meanwhile, in South
Asia
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, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa, the
illiteracy
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rate is substantially high with around half of the female population being illiterate. In conclusion, literacy level differs between genders and across regions of the world
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, asia, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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