The bar chart below shows the US’ top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago.
The given bar chart below illustrates the US top 10 processed food export
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and 6 years ago.
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that
all countries, Remove the redundancy
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last
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year
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gain
more money from export markets, than six years ago.
Now,turning to the details Canada Wrong verb form
gained
earn
13,2 billion dollars which is the highest amount of earned money among the countries for the Wrong verb form
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Kong
the situation is the opposite, because for the Add a comma
Kong,
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year
they gained 0,8 billion dollars.
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year,
Also
, it is clear from the data that Australia and Hong Kong six Linking Words
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year
ago earned the same amount of money, 0,3 $, but Fix the agreement mistake
years
the
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last
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year
Australia received more Use synonyms
that
Hong Kong. The Correct word choice
than
fugure
was 1.0 US dollarsCorrect your spelling
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