The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given picture illustrates the production of electric energy from coal.
Overall
,
electricity
generation from coal is a man-made,
8 stage
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, linear process. It begins with the
minnig
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mining
of coal, and ultimately ends with the distribution of
electricity
to homes and factories. First of all, coal is obtained from a coal mine, which is
then
passed through a crusher to convert the large pieces into small.After that, it is loaded on trucks and
are
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delivered to another place, where
heat
is used to convert small pieces into
gas
with the help of
heat
. Once transformed into
gas
, it is
then
cooled and cleaned in sequence. In
this
step,
heat
is released as a waste product. After cleaning,
this
gas
is now used in
gas
power plants, where
electricity
is generated and
heat
is produced as a
biproduct
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byproduct
.
This
electricity
, in the final step, is supplied to the house and factories for use.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, heat, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Coal mining
  • Open-pit mining
  • Transportation logistics
  • Power plant
  • Pulverized coal
  • Combustion
  • Boiler
  • Steam generation
  • Turbines
  • Kinetic energy
  • Electrical energy
  • Generator
  • Cooling and condensing
  • Recycling
  • Electricity transmission
  • National grid
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