The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart provides key information about the average
number
of hours
spent during a holiday in Greece by tourists
from various countries. The units are measured by the number
of hours
.
Overall
it is clear from the graph that Chinese travellers represent
the highest Verb problem
spend
number
of hours
in reading activity, but clearly
they Add a comma
clearly,
have
the lowest Verb problem
spend
number
of hours
on
visiting places. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, the majority of Brazilian and Turkish tourists
prefer spending their time at the beach.
According to
the data shown, American tourists
dedicate 5 hours
to reading books, while
Chinese tourists
had
a significant 8 Wrong verb form
have
hours
. However
, American tourists
spend
more time Wrong verb form
spent
with
4 Change preposition
apply
hours
compared to the Chinese who took 3 hours
only.
In terms of Brazilian tourists
they devote 2 Add a comma
tourists,
hours
only to visiting places, while
American and Turkish tourists
had
an equivalentWrong verb form
have
3
Change preposition
of 3
hours
. Brazilian tourists
were at the beach for around 6 hours
; however
, Turkish travellers spent 5 hours
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