The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart provides key information about the average
number
of Use synonyms
hours
spent during a holiday in Greece by Use synonyms
tourists
from various countries. The units are measured by the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
.
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Overall
it is clear from the graph that Chinese travellers Linking Words
represent
the highest Verb problem
spend
number
of Use synonyms
hours
in reading activity, but Use synonyms
clearly
they Add a comma
clearly,
have
the lowest Verb problem
spend
number
of Use synonyms
hours
Use synonyms
on
visiting places. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, the majority of Brazilian and Turkish Linking Words
tourists
prefer spending their time at the beach.
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According to
the data shown, American Linking Words
tourists
dedicate 5 Use synonyms
hours
to reading books, Use synonyms
while
Chinese Linking Words
tourists
Use synonyms
had
a significant 8 Wrong verb form
have
hours
. Use synonyms
However
, American Linking Words
tourists
Use synonyms
spend
more time Wrong verb form
spent
with
4 Change preposition
apply
hours
compared to the Chinese who took 3 Use synonyms
hours
only.
In terms of Brazilian Use synonyms
Use synonyms
tourists
they devote 2 Add a comma
tourists,
hours
only to visiting places, Use synonyms
while
American and Turkish Linking Words
tourists
Use synonyms
had
an equivalentWrong verb form
have
3
Change preposition
of 3
hours
. Brazilian Use synonyms
tourists
were at the beach for around 6 Use synonyms
hours
; Use synonyms
however
, Turkish travellers spent 5 Linking Words
hours
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, tourists with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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