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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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The
line
 graph gives information about the
iteams
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items
teams
 of three forest
industry
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industries
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 in European countries
as well as
 the name of
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the producation
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producation
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production
 was timber ,
pulp
 and paper during the years 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the
lines
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 graph in general
was
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increased and
it is clear that
 the most popular was paper in the
last
line
while
 the
lowset
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lowest
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 point in
line
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the line
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 was
pulp
. First of all, in 1980 the
line
 of
pulp
was
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dropped sharply to reach around 2 .
Then
 the
pulp
 was rocketed to made almost tripled
while
,
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 the figure has been unchanging from 1990 to after 1995 years .
However
 the
pulp
 reach to highest point in the years 2000. The forest
industry
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industry's
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producation
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production
 of timber
was overtaking
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the
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pulp
 in 1980 to reach
the
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a
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 higher number at
an
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exactly 10 . After
that
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that,
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 the
line
 decreased gradually to touch number 8
then
 went down slowly .
However
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the
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timber ,
pulp
 and paper they
was
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were
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the
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at the
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 same point between 1995 and 2000 .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, pulp with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Production levels
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Comparison
  • 20-year period
  • Data
  • Forest industry products
  • Percentage
  • Amount
  • European country
  • Analysis
  • Observation
  • Graph
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