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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 line chart depicts the number of Indian and Chinese populations in the past until
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 and gives a prediction for the growth in the next 25 years. It is clear from the graph that both countries are in opposite trends.
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 what is shown, in 2000, the number of citizens ratio
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in China was higher as it accounted for around 1250
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whereas
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 in India was less by 250
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Indian population rocked in the next decades as it is considered to be around 1200 and 1320
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 in 2010 and 2020 respectively. For China, the figure slightly rose to meet its highest one at 1400
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 in 2025. The future prediction for the two countries is that both will hit the same quantity in 2030, which is expected to be 1420
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 will have a steady figure before it drops to 1390 in 2025. India will continue its elevation until the year 2025
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 the prospect of achieving 1600
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persist
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much higher population in the next 25 decades in reverse to China's pattern.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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