A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, – describe what this book was about – explain how this book influenced you – say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to share my views on the magazine which I recently read. My name is Navdeep and I love to read books in my daily life.
Last
day I read your magazine named Imaginary I liked the most.
This
book
is purely based on present life,
how
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and how
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we can change our
life
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lives
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in
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to
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better living standards
in
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for
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less money. After reading the whole
book
the most interesting thing I came across about dealing with problems and finding a solution to overcome
everydays
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everyday
problem
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problems
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.
Apart from
this
, I had already suggested
this
book
to my friends because they are dealing with financial problems at home.I believe that
this
book
influence more people in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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days because in the modern
era
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everybody dealing with stress and mental illness . Thanks, with regards, Navdeep
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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, try organizing your response into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point: description of the book, personal impact, and influence on others.
Task Achievement
Include more specific examples or anecdotes to better illustrate how the book influenced you and how it might affect others.
Task Achievement
You have effectively addressed all parts of the task: description, personal influence, and potential influence on others.
Suitability of Writing Tone
The letter maintains a friendly and appropriate tone throughout.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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