The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the top priorities of business companies in the USA in the year 2016.
Overall
, the majority of employees
emphasized an increase
in converting contacts/leads to customers
and an increase
in the number
of contacts and details. Reducing the cost of contact
/lead/customer acquisition was the lowest priority among all company employees
.
26 to 200 employees
prioritised 79% to increase
in
the Change preposition
apply
number
of contact
details,
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apply
while
prioritising 73% in converting contact
leads to consumers. Moreover
, 25 employees
prioritised 71% in converting contact
leads to consumers and increasing the number
of contact
details. Meanwhile, 26
to 200 Change preposition
of 26
employees
47 % prioritise increasing revenue derived from existing customers
and providing the ROI of marketing activities. However
, 201 or more employees
prioritised 66% in converting contact
leads to consumers and increasing the number
of contacts and leads. Furthermore
, 201 or more employees
prioritised 55% to increase
revenue derived of
existing Change preposition
from
customers
.
25 employees
and 26 to 200 employees
emphasized 20% and 26% respectively in reducing the cost of contact
/leads/customers
. Moreover
, 201 employees
30% to
prioritised reducing the cost of Verb problem
apply
contact
/leads/customers
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